hey readers,
ever noticed rains??i mean obviously everybody has experienced dem...but ever noticed??
wen a drop of rain falls over d face...how 2 fresh nd how energizing it is....nd wen u try 2 rub it off ur face,d freshness dznt end...it enters u nd replenishes ur soul...well...mayb i m being 2 poetic but dats wat i feel....can relationships be like dis??nd here m including all relationships:friendship,affection,respect and love.......
can der b 1 person (like d rains).....who can enrich d soul??cn der b a perfect relationship?? i hate 2 admit this.....but i have never experienced 1...nd so i doubt its existance!! maybe i m asking 4 2 much...being a typical piscean...in my dream world but i love 2 dream it dis way....nd i love rains!!!
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Hi Kriti. In a hope that you willn ever land up again on ur blog page to view this comment, I am writing this small comment.
Afetr reading this post of urs on rain and rain drops, I realized how deep a rain drop can fall. But hey I know someone who has felt like this. If not as perfect as u want but might have reached closer to ur dream. ANd ofcourse its not me.
Nice thoughts gal!!! Kepp writing and I have also written something on rain - completely different from u. Read if u wish to. Enjoy.
Absoulately nice der,
I js got a new way to express dis feelin thru my 1 more poem nd I finalized the name also tht will be "Barish ki wo pehli Boond"
By d way thnx Pal.
nd u cn also find tht one on my blog coz u r d source where I got dis idea so u r most wlcm at http://pyaridunia.blogspot.com/
Aryannn
Thank you Aryann (Umang).. I am glad to have inspired a thought in you... Although I could not find your poem..Please send me a link to the same if you can...
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